Planning - Pitch_Video_Feedback

Feedback on Presentation:
Title:
We went through a couple titles before everyone settle for "Soldier Unknown", they were:
- Project X,
- Soldier X,
- Unknown Soldier (Which we found out to be an actually film),
- Project Unknown,
- Battle Scarred,
- Heroes Leave, Monsters Return,
- Broken Soldier.
Also our teachers like the font choices we had made for our title, but believed we need something else to it.
I decided to add a silhouette of a rifle to emphasis our Project Title.    

Logo:

Make sure we don’t say "weird" for our production logo.

Twisted Vine Production, will be base on a vine tree with branches over making the words. This creates a strange atmosphere for people viewing it as it connotes disruption, chaos and unease. This is done to set up the tone of the film and what the audience can expect from our production.

Music:
Have it be minimal as to set up a creepy and strange tone, making the audience start to feel uncomfortable when watching the trailer.

Story:

-Walking with family, has a flashback and family are dead on the floor (Could be still image/photo, then goes to them on the  floor).
-With the party scene, have party poppers to set off Murray's flashback.
-Have close-ups on the crimes so the audiences are left in the dark, to who is the really antagonistic.
-Probably easier to have Murray's character have a girlfriend instead of a family.