My thoughts:
When I had finish my A2 product, I didn't believe it was perfect. So after I have published my film trailer, magazine poster and film poster I asked my peers (of family and students) and my teachers what they thought of my product. This allowed me to change and improve my overall grade. Most feedback was positive this was brilliant but some were negative but you will always get this on what every you do. What I do is that i see negative feedback as constructive criticism, this is because all feedback is a way to help you improve. This meant I could make adjustments to the mistakes and improve my blogs and then i can help utilize my conventions when it needed it.
Film trailer:
Positive feedback:
The use of low key lighting is really good in setting the mood and it corresponds with our aim to have good cinematography. this was main aimed at the end with the silhouette of the gun, as it put most of the spectators on edge.
Editing was done well, keeping the the pace and tempo at a pleasant speed, many through it wasn't to fast for them and kept them entertained, as the transition and titles were very smooth.
The wide range of camera shots throughout the film trailer. The audience noticed shaky cam whilst kidnapping, they say said it was good to show realism.
Negative feedback:
The sound quality, as there wasn’t enough sound for most of the audience to enjoy the trailer. As the non-diegetic sound was to quite for the audience to help build up the suspense. Meaning there was a lack of atmosphere.
The Actors where also criticised, as scene where the doctor is talking to the the antagonist he doesn't suit the role of that job which the audience have pointed out. And most said he voice sounded to robotic.
Film Poster:
Positive Feedback:
The layout and colour scheme was really good to the audience as the main image left enough room to have other things around it, and the colour scheme was clean and crisp.
Negative Feedback:
It was too plain and simplistic for some of my peers meaning they didn't find it that interesting and very dull.
Magazine Cover:
Positive Feedback:
The different colour scheme to the poster and the use of the same image of Murray. Giving the magazine nice look that would attract audiences.
Negative Feedback:
Very simplest look to it and very formal for a magazine cover, as well as the colour scheme. with very simple looking titles.
Good but you needed to explain what changes you made to your productions as a result of this audience feedback.
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